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:icontheartr:
I like it, eye-candy look, but you shouldn't use more than 2 types of fonts.

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:iconliquid-snake:
i concur too, many typefaces... also, photoshop out the left trees beneath the special offer... or use an alternative background there, so it smothly blends with the background... cool work nonetheless.

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:iconpixelbudah:
love the colours love the simplicity yet eyecatching of the layou keep it up

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:iconaskiller:
great layout but some things i'd change: the shadow of the blue part on the picture it's a little dark, and for some reason the white linear on the menu i don't think it really fits the scene, i think it'd be better without it, hope it helped.

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:iconaskiller:
great layout but some things i'd change: the shadow of the blue part on the picture it's a little dark, and for some reason the white linear on the menu i don't think it really fits the scene, i think it'd be better without it, hope it helped.

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:iconfoxdesigns:
I quite like the overall feel. The colours blend nicely.

But as others have mentioned--simplify the fonts. Also, I would blend the background image into the main image more smoothly--The blend on the right is good, but the blend on the left steps down and distracts me. I would continue the horizon line and "fluffy cloud" feel across the entire background.

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:iconchanaka:
very nice design :)

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great muhfuckin work!!!

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