i concur too, many typefaces... also, photoshop out the left trees beneath the special offer... or use an alternative background there, so it smothly blends with the background... cool work nonetheless.
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great layout but some things i'd change: the shadow of the blue part on the picture it's a little dark, and for some reason the white linear on the menu i don't think it really fits the scene, i think it'd be better without it, hope it helped.
great layout but some things i'd change: the shadow of the blue part on the picture it's a little dark, and for some reason the white linear on the menu i don't think it really fits the scene, i think it'd be better without it, hope it helped.
I quite like the overall feel. The colours blend nicely.
But as others have mentioned--simplify the fonts. Also, I would blend the background image into the main image more smoothly--The blend on the right is good, but the blend on the left steps down and distracts me. I would continue the horizon line and "fluffy cloud" feel across the entire background.
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But as others have mentioned--simplify the fonts. Also, I would blend the background image into the main image more smoothly--The blend on the right is good, but the blend on the left steps down and distracts me. I would continue the horizon line and "fluffy cloud" feel across the entire background.
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